I spent an interesting time last week. Firstly, I went to Kelowna and Vernon by a comfortable bus. In Kelowna, I stayed in a posh room. Also, I went to the beach to walk. Then I took a trip by boat. It was a great trip. After that, I decided to go to Vernon. In Vernon, I visited a nice park which had many ducks. Finally , I had an interesting time in Kelowna and Vernon.
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Hi Abdulaziz.
ReplyDeleteI think your paragraph is good.I think you spend good time. Specific when you took the boat. in addition, the description is clear when you talk about the bus is comfortable, beach, visied park, and all your paragraph is easy description.
1- How long have you stay there?
2- How much spend your money in all the trip?