I had an exiting time last holiday. I went with my friend to Whistler, Vancouver and Victoria. We spent eleven days on this trip. We were staying four days in Whistler because there are many activities in it. We went to the highest mountain in Whistler, and we skied and snowmobile there. Actually, we wanted to stay in Whistler more than four days, but we had no time for it. When we moved to Vancouver, we stayed just one night then we moved to Victoria. In Victoria, we visited the B.C. museum, and went to many gardens there. Honestly, I spent an interesting time in this trip, and I won`t forget this trip.
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Abdulaziz
ReplyDeleteI'll suggest some changes:
On this trip
no by - staying four days
you don't play ski - you ski
for it - no did
okay?
Hi Bruce
ReplyDeletei thank you for your comment.
it was good trip . If you go to Vancouver later , you should extend your trip more days . There is a lot of thing to do .
ReplyDeleteHi AZI very nice trip , and very good gramar . I think your gramar is improve .
ReplyDeleteHi Aziz.
ReplyDeleteYou did well.
I enjoy reading your paragraph.
best wishes.
Thanks Mohammed ..... I will do
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